You've still got a ways to go
I liked the concept, but I couldn't enjoy this for four reasons.
1. The voice-acting, at times, sounded almost emotionless. Example: The spider's screams sounded like he didn't care too much about his life.
2. Art is bad in some areas. Example: The phone looked like a giant macaroni.
3. Laggy, as stated below. I had to turn the quality down considerably. It looked grotesque.
4. Too much silence in the background. Some music would have been nice.
A masterpiece, without a doubt
I love the animation and story. What really does it for me is the music and character design. Lindsey is crazy talented and I loved the appearance of the creatures such as the guardian and Mr. Shadowchap.
Good job! I can't wait to see more from you.
'HOLY MOLY THE SCREEN GREW'
^ One of many reactions I had to this. I've been a fan of the comic ever since '[S] John: Reunite with your loving wife and daughter.' I've laughed, I've cried (I think), but this blew my mind to a farther degree than anything else in the comic. I anticipated this for a while and, honestly, didn't expect as much as I recieved, teaching me never to underestimate your capabilities. It's amazing for a webcomic to exist that not only sets the bar for webcomics, but art, music, and ANIMATION as well!
One of the things I love about the comic is, whenever it looks like everything's coming together for the ultimate climax and the comic will end in about another act, you add more properties and systems to the multiverse of the comic. This is amazing to me because it WORKS. Throwing new stuff into the story in the middle of the story shouldn't work, but you make it work somehow.
To those of you who do not read Homestuck: Read it. Right now. I cannot stress this enough. I finally found a person in my school who reads Homestuck recently and practically had a fangasm.
You are the god of creativity.
- Good music.
- Creative concepts.
- Godmode allows you to give the levels test runs with no penalty before giving an easy official run.
- Ending made no sense.
I was about to give this game a great review. Then I fell into the trap room and I thought 'well, that's twenty minutes of my life I'll never be getting back.'
The control mechanic takes some figuring out, but it's well-designed. The only real flaw is that it's short, which keeps you wanting more. But it's a great game overall.
By the way, I got the dinosaur easter egg :D :D :D
And pointers you shall have.
This is a great piece. The only criticism I can make is that the legs are too skinny. Way too skinny. And also, maybe a bit tall.
Keep it up; this is a nice style you've got going on here and I look forward to seeing your artwork in the future.
Thanks so much! I see whatcha mean. I'll keep that in mind :)
I just hate how most of the reviewers here just focus on the girl in the corner. This is a great piece. Skeleton pirates are awesome.
Thats why shes there.
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